Oookay, couple things. First, you don't upload folders, you zip/rar them using either a paid program like WinZip or a free program like 7zip. Both Mac and Windows also have their own, native ways of zipping that usually only involve something like right clicking and either "Send to..." or "Archive..." Really need you to zip and upload all your files, if only because clicking through all the spoilers is really annoying and nearly impossible to keep track of -w-; Which is necessary, when critiquing.

Secondly, please review both the instructions within the script (such as, including the little heads on the Bakuman pages) and all of the typesetting guidelines (especially shouting bubbles and digital text bubbles). In keeping with the guidelines, all of your Wild Words could use to be smaller; it's mentioned on the guidelines what the typical font sizes are. You're missing SFX on Sword and Cornett, too. (On the topic of SFX, I wouldn't typeset in SFX like on FT, since most series are speed series. Only slow series get t/sed SFX. You can leave it in since you already did it, but for future reference...)

Please make these changes, upload your file, and then you should be ready for a proper critique ^^