I'm sorry but this is no good. You need to resize your pages to 1300px height. You also did the old test (there has been a new one for a few months now). There have been too many beginner mistakes to point them out. I'll take a look at your redo once you practice a bit more ^^ Thanks for applying though.

I suggest you take a look at the tutorials below:
cleaning 101         http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/cleaning-101/
denoise tutorial     http://franky-house.com/forums/showthread.php?t=144
common mistakes http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/common-cleaning-mistakes/
example actions    http://ieatsoul.com/training-ground/actions-for-speed-scanlation-1374/