Hi

I've pasted the proofread preliminary test and my bio here. Hoping to hear from you soon.

Name/Nickname: Sarah
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: UAE, +4 GMT
Gender: Female
Age: Old enough
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: Have only gmail
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreading
Why You Want This Position: To be of some use
Your Time Available: Whenever needed
Experience: Proofread two released chapters...not much experience, I'm afraid.

Revised Test:

p.118
Niko: There’s no existing cage in Polaris!

Text: In fact, the story of Polaris is all about how "the prince and princess of Ursa Minor accepted their arranged marriage and lived happily-ever-after." That's it.

Text: Yes. But what intervened in this story was my ‘imagination’.
Fran: ... The conclusion ought to be the same.
Sfx: Rustling

Text: However, you’re also being deceptive. You're talking about your ‘imagination’ since you have your favourable story line of "She decided on her own to stay by her love".

p.119
Niko: You’re a liar!
Text: Aah, why is this child looking directly at me with those kinds of eyes?

Niko: You deceived me! / You're awful!
Text: As if I'm wrong.
Sfx: Breathe in

Fran: Yes.

Fran: Maybe it's a lie. // I thought it would be nice if it was like that.

p.120
Text: However, I didn't deceive you. That is to say, they’re stories told for the purpose of entertaining people...
Text: The truth of fiction is almost helpless before ‘imagination’. As for this world, everything is about fact based on evidence.
Fran: It doesn't matter whether it's true or false. Since it’ll be you who will decide if my story is true. / You should just accept it, if it’s interesting.
Text: Well, without evidence, even history and fact could become fiction. / I'm only saying that it's more fun if there’s room for intervention.

p.121
Fran: That's why the listener also decides on which truth their own hearts want.
Text: ‘Cage of Polaris’. / This cage is made up of thoughts called ‘me’. This would also be true for people who are happy being locked up in a cage.
Fran: You too.

p.122
Fran: Don't you think that freedom of speech and pleasantness lie in there?
Niko: ...

Niko: Niko doesn't understand such difficult things, although... / Niko understands one thing!
Fran: What is it?

Niko: That you're a pervert!!!
Sfx: Smile.
Fran: Yes, that's correct. I'm glad that you got it right.

p.123
Fran: ---Ah, it's about time for me to go, otherwise it’ll get too dark.
Niko: ...

That's all. Take care