Hello, I will be your judge for today. :D
You need to work on your deniosing. It looks like your using Neat image. You may want look at some more tuts.
Beelzebub: Image is blurry, parts of the large tree isn't burned. ASAH on the vending machine isn't burned.
Guy on the bench pants isn't burned. Level whites.
(Right to left)
Blazer Drive:
Panel 1: Girl's ribbon isn't burned.
Panel 2: SFX need to be burned.
Panel 3: The hand's mouth need to be burned.
Panel 5: Grays are bad.
Panel 7: Under the first bubble, his shirt needs to be burned.
D.Gray Man
Page: over leveled, I can barley see the gray over the flowers.
Panel 5: The guy's hat needs to be burned; also get rid the gutter shadow on his shirt.
Defense Devil:
Page: Grays are bad. page is blurry, level the whites a bit.
Panel 5: burn her hair.
Fairy Tail:
Page: Grays again.
Panel 2: Burn the maids right shoulder, the barrel.
Naruto:
Page: Grays are a different shade in some places.
(I hated this when I was apping >.>)
Reborn:
Page: Some the spikes need to be burned. Grays.Page is burrly.Burn the weapons the animals.