I'm not a cleaner, but let me tell that your your hard work are:

1) Too blurry.(in this just use some plugin topaz you can see it in the training ground)
2) please take a look in that gray shape.
3) the blacks are good.

I still think that it's better if you wait for a proper cleaner's crits, but if you want to fix what I said first, you're doing us a favor XDD

WAIT YOU DERP THIS IS MY POST! YOU'RE JUST CHANGING THE CRITS!
loljk

here's the test
http://www.mediafire.com/?11vats0pldyt66h

if I keep having the same problems as before maybe I should practice a little bit more before giving it another try

what a nice tip!!!!

Thanks for the tip, it really helped.
Here's the test
http://www.mediafire.com/?0d6dl0e12ry9czp

This is my last try though, I obviously have a problem with the level so I think it'd be best if I practise before trying to apply again.
Thanks for all the comments, they were really helpfull.

here we go
C+ white area is ok, but for the gray area still looks dusty and uneven ^ ^
Beelzebub= nice, but looks a little gray area overleveling and a bit sharpen
DMW = nice even the gray i a bit llight ^^
DD = to sharpen for gray area, and dont forget redraw missing detail in hair
FT = good, although it looks a little bit rough on the page that are combined into one page
KHR = nice, but IMO the gray texture a bit sharpen
rainbow = not enought leveling at this page


Note :
do not give up, by trying and trying you will get better again, youre page developments have increased, and the need to remember is to experience a very big influence