you are getting better~
well now... first off you still have dust on the blacks, make sure you are leveling it right.


it also looks like i made myself misunderstood.... the errors i pointed out were pretty much in all of the pages except Blazer Drive that one's alright.
now maybe you would like some help, if not you should read some tutorials...

so this time please redo the pages and look out for dust and overdenoising...

here's feedback for your t/sing test.

dont bold.
cap everything. includes felt and cczoinks.
felt is for translator notes, sfx notes, or author notes only.
example of felt. http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/169/10/

example of shouting bubble. http://www.onemanga.com/Defense_Devil/40/04/
and http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/169/11/

and here's guideline for thought lines.

1. Thought in a bubble. There're many kind of thought bubbles. No matter how they look, use WildWord, Italic and #545454.
Now, to the thought that is not in a word bubble. There're 2 kind of them.
2. A character's narrating. Then use WildWord, Roman and black.
3. A character's thinking but it's just not in a word bubble. Use WildWord, Italic and #545454.

when you found a period or a comma was missing in translation, add them when you typeset.
!, ?, ..., and etc, no matter how many of those you see in translation, use 3 the maximum. ex, !!?, !!! or ---.

looking forward to your redo. ^^

BB 7
- 3 / "weak" is a thought. Italics + #545454
- 6 / "he doesn't seem...." that is also a thought.

BB 11
- 3 / "oi oi" and "what are you..." are both thoughts.

DD 1 is good

DD 3
- 1 / Try not to leave punctuation by itself unless the bubble is too small or you absolutely have to.
- 2 / Move the "A" back with "I'm"
- 3 / Move the "!" back with "Bichula"

FT 4
- 2 / put "no" with "doubt", try not to leave 1 word on a line unless the word is really long, or is in the top or bottom line

FT 5
- You can cut out some of the punctuation or repeated letters to make the words bigger. Bigger text looks like they're yelling.

FT 9
- There's a lot of small isolated words ... try to keep those together.
- 4 / text is too big in the 2 bubbles

HB
- 5 / Put a white stroke around "steals a glance"

Reborn
- Where is the reborn page?

You're pretty good, just need an eye for text and punctuation placement. Also, try to read the text when you're typesetting so you know if it's a thought or not.

This is a really good page to read for Typesetting, maybe you should check it out?
http://senbonzakura.kageyoshi.net/2009/05/02/typesetting/

BUMP!!!!!!!!!! 

BTW, you switched your typeset and clean test DL links around...

BB 7
- good! (:

BB 11
- Sometimes, the proofreaders don't catch punctuation or ! / ? marks. Only SFX and some (very few) connected bubbles won't have punctuation. I see 7 spots that needs punctuation.

DD 1
- something I noticed, try to keep all your text within the page. like "art"
- I would try to separate the labels "story" and "art" from the names "youn in-wan" and "yang kyung-il". You can use a colon, change the font sizes, whatever. Just easier to understand. (:

DD 3
- 1 / move the "~" squiggly back up with "sama"
- good!

FT 3
- 7 / "come with me" isn't centred

FT 5
- good!

FT 9
- text a bit smaller would be nice, but other than that, it's good!

HB
- This page is good I think

I think you're almost there! (:

here's feedback for your t/sing test.

dont bold.
cap everything. includes felt and cczoinks.
felt is for translator notes, sfx notes, or author notes only.
example of felt. http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/169/10/

example of shouting bubble. http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/169/11/

you haven't fixed those....... D:

like i already said, felt is only for translator notes, sfx notes, or author notes that stays outside the panels.
if you want to replace translated sfx inside the panel do not use felt but use some fancy fonts to match the art. example, http://mangahelpers.com/s/i-eat-manga/readonline/73377/5?t=1266557937 but this is just a test so why dont you stick with the basic?
don't use felt for a line like in reborn page.

Look at the Fairy Tail page for shouting bubble (link in a quote above). no vertical please.

also, use augie for any handwriting text.

quoting from Malionette's comment

- You can cut out some of the punctuation or repeated letters to make the words bigger. Bigger text looks like they're yelling.

i completely agree with her but for some bubbles your text is just way too big. it really depends on the size of bubble and amount of text but for wildword, 20-21pt is the maximum i use. 18pt is already pretty big for most cases.

check every page all over again carefully. like Malionette said you're not bad but a lot of mistakes still left here and there.

Bumpz...