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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #30 on: September 23, 2011, 04:50:25 PM »
Quote from: Chiriko on September 23, 2011, 04:47:42 PM
Yeah, sure, do whatever you think right :p


noope.
it must do whatever chi think right :P
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #31 on: September 23, 2011, 05:57:37 PM »
if you're redoing from scratch then just use the files from the typesetting test. make sure you save your psd's so you can use them for the next redo (so you won't have to redraw again). besides saving psd's, save for web as png and upload those for us.

i didn't fully understand what your question was but i hope this answers it.
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #32 on: September 24, 2011, 03:07:15 PM »
this is my fifth shoooot ..
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=A1O8OTMS
please eat 'em ..
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #33 on: September 24, 2011, 04:36:50 PM »
Quote from: UnguViolet on September 24, 2011, 03:07:15 PM
this is my fifth shoooot ..
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=A1O8OTMS
please eat 'em ..
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Guhhhhh please not megaupload D: They hate me so much >,< sendspace would be awesome >,<
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #34 on: September 25, 2011, 07:31:44 AM »
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ..
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #35 on: September 26, 2011, 02:24:23 PM »
Level 2:

Oh my god... your pages are unbearably awesome. I think you pass every pages except Reborn. The redraws are, much too altered. The point of redrawing is to make nobody realize that there was a japanese text there. And you altered it so much that it looked so obvious.

I'm sorry, but I do think that you need to restart the redrawing T____T

If you pass this Reborn, I'll gladly vote you into the team without doing Level 3 unless other typesetter has complaints~

Best of luck!
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #36 on: September 26, 2011, 02:42:22 PM »
okay .
i try ASAP ..
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with <3 to chi ...


edit: here my reborn page ..
i hope you like it same that i like it ..
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http://www.mediafire.com/?cb6bgn4oc5yeqb2
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #37 on: September 27, 2011, 11:06:52 AM »
you improved a LOT \o/ really it's so much better than the last version i saw. good job!

Defense Devil 4:
- good

Defense Devil 14:
- - you've used the anti aliassing method "bold", use "smooth"
- p1: "thanks" nudge up 1px
- p3: "what the?" nudge left 1px. "who the hell" nudge up
- p5: "the one who's" put the ellipses right behind "to hell" instead of putting it on it's own line. "a devil!" since he's talking in a creepy manner you should use mouthbreather for this.

Fairy Tail 6:
- p1: "of course" nudge up 1px
- p4: "i want to know" acceptable, but it will look better if you make it a little bit bigger.
- p4: "i want to know what it (...)" you managed to get a good diamond shape, but because text is pretty long compared to the shape of the bubble. try to arrange it so that it's a bit longer and less wide, so it'll fit the bubble shape more.
- p4: "you are forbidden" the same applies here. try to made the text less wide. that way you can make it bigger. He's shouting here so it will look nicer if the text is bigger too to convey that.
- p4: "but... he doesn't seem" and the same applies here. put "he" on the line with "but..." and it will look more balanced.
- p5: "besides, i haven't" actually i'm going to say the same thing again XD the middle line is much wider than the rest so that kind of throws off the balance. the bubble here is a bit square so try to aim for a square/rectangular shape here.
- p7: "but that was only" nudge down a bit. "i feel as though" nudge right 1px. "no means no!!!" nudge up

reborn 13:
- p1: "just do exactly" nudge up. "what the heck" nudge right 1px. "you're not making" make it a tiny bit smaller
- p2: "let's hurry" make it slightly smaller and nudge up. "it'll be a tough" nudge down 1px. "NN!" nudge down 1px.
- p3: "you're always like that" nudge up
- p4, 5 and 6: it looks like you used photoshop italics for the text here. when you do italics always use menu next to the font selection menu. put it on italics instead of roman.
- p5: the redrawing is still a bit obvious. you can see that the tones are fading behind the text. when you redraw it, try to fake the illusion that the hair is there, meaning you have to use, for example, the pen tool and draw the shape of his hair. then fill it up with the screentone, as if it was done by the author. even if it looks a bit weird, usually it looks a lot better when you put the text on it.

reborn 15:
- much, much, much better!!! if i were to nitpick i'd say it would look prettier if you arranged it like "the buckle/of the storm/ version X!!!" but it's good enough. great improvement!!

sword and cornett 7:
- p1: "alright" make it smaller and nudge down. "on my signal" nudge down slightly. "we'll show them" nudge right and down 1px
- p4: "not that powerlesss" nudge right 1px
- p5: "damn!" nudge right and down. "we're not going to make it" you can use 14pt if you arrange it like "we're not/going to/make it...!!". that will fit the bubble shape more too ^^

could you please upload all pages for the next test? not every page is in it but i'd like to see them all, even if someone already passed them. :3
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Re: fc134gent's Typesetter Test
« Reply #38 on: October 06, 2011, 06:56:37 AM »
sorry for wasting your time .
i'm little bit in no mood.
and i'll try again :D
this is my six .
http://www.mediafire.com/?7ov9y7s54ub2e6m
and about the whole page .
i don't have the rest,
so i just upload what i have though ..
and i'm willing for the next test that you wanna give to me and if you willing to..
with best ever wishes ..
-UV-
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