Third application that I'm going to correct today XD:

Beelzebub: Please resize to 1200px height and 72p/inch. You forgot to burn some blacks, like the top of the tree and the letter H on the vending machine.

DGM: The grays are a little bit weird on this page. Pretty good for such a crappy raw.

DD: Good job, you just left a few dusts.

DGMExtra: You don't have to do an extra page, but here are my comments on it. The page is only a little over leveled. Look at the edges, they are pretty crisp.

FT: Rotate the page, except for that it's a good clean.

Naruto: A little bit blurry, sharpen it a bit.

Reborn: Remove the dusts on the white. (like the bottom right corner) Grays are a little dark too, level the page. Good merge for you first time =) This page can be sharpen a little bit too.

Could you let me know how long it took for one page?

Good luck on your next try.

lunaaaa! *glomps*

looks good!

ok here are the crits! :D

Beelzebub: nice! although i think the page could be a taaad sharper. also.. the sky is a bit too dark >.>

D.Gray-Man: looks really good, the only thing i've got to say is that you could sharpen the lineart a bit, since it's a little blurry. try levelling the whites or sharpen it ^^

Defense Devil: level the whites a liiitle bit more so that the page looks a bit sharper, other than that great!

Fairy Tail: the lineart is a little bit grey at some places but you can still level the blacks ^^ maybe burn a little bit if needed but it's almost good so be careful :P

Naruto: niiice! the only thing i'm gonna say is that you have to level both black and whites to make it look a little bit sharper.

Reborn: good :D (psst you missed some dust in the whites on the right side of the page, and in the stroke of the letters on the left side of the page)

overall it's good ^^ you basically only made the same mistake on these pages :P i'm looking forward to your redo :D

Beelzebub: Good, except that the grays are a little too dark. (level the grays a bit)

DGM: Grays are a bit weird. When you denoise this page use lighter settings and it will come out much better. Also rotate the page so it is leveled horizontal.

DD: Really good.

FT: Level the grays a bit darker. You forgot to rotate this page too.

Naruto: Level/sharpen the gray panels a bit, they will look less blurry.

Reborn: This page is really good! The only thing I could see is the little blurry dust in the REBORN title.

All pages are easy to fix except for DGM, you should redo that page to fix the grays. (I know, it's an annoying raw ><)

Good luck! You should be able to pass next time when you fixed those.