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Offline jdjtbgs

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Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« on: July 03, 2010, 11:54:34 PM »
Name/Nickname: Jinn/Jdjtbgs
Country of Origin & Time Zone: Canada & GMT -8:00
Gender: Female
Age: 17 years
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: jdjtbgs@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Cleaner.
Why You Want This Position: kuz...i work hard and i'd like the experience and i love manga!!!
Your Time Available: June-August: Anytime,  from September onwards: TBA
Experience: This is my 1st time.

Test: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TSF5ER4W
Note: I use PS Elements.  It took me roughly 25 mins per page.
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2010, 12:17:05 AM »
Ahh another one  :disapointed...I will get to you after, I finish the one I'm doing now.

OK,

Can you upload your pages too mediafire next time(I hate waiting...).

You need to denoise your pages, Heres a guide for information and etc.Click. Heres another guide for some others things Click.After you denoise you pages post them here again.


« Last Edit: July 04, 2010, 12:44:34 AM by Saosama »
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2010, 07:28:11 AM »
here is the denoised ones
http://www.mediafire.com/?mym3umtyozz
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2010, 02:13:58 PM »
Hi! ^^ it looks good! I like your denoising :D here are the crits:

Beelzebub: the height should be 1200px. the denoising is quite good but you have to burn the blacks. They are kind of grey now and it looks like there are ‘X’ shapes in them.

Blazer Drive: greys look good but overall the page is a bit blurry. Level it and make sure you don’t have a grey blur surrounding black lines.

D.Gray-man: it’s a little bit overdenoised. The greys are too blurry. Make sure the black lines are sharp too.

Defence Devil: I don’t know what you did to denoise here but it looks kind of strange >.> Did you denoise this in a different way than the other pages? Try it again please.

Fairy Tail: greys look good here :D do the same as with blazer drive: level it and burn where needed.

Naruto: level and burn here too ^^

Reborn: great! Only level and burn too if needed :)

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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 03:46:27 AM »
here it is again =D
http://www.mediafire.com/?dwxtnwy2qnn
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2010, 01:42:44 PM »
that looks really good! you're almost there ^^

Beelzebub: good! Only burn the blacks a bit so that they really are completely black.

Blazer Drive: make it a sharper by levelling it a bit ^^

D.Gray-Man: could be a bit sharper.

Defence Devil: slightly level the whites a bit and burn at some places. For example their pupils aren’t black yet :P

Fairy Tail: first panel could use some burning, except for that: good job!

Naruto: awesome! I have nothing to say ^^

Reborn: great! Looks really good! Could you only burn the speedlines?
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #6 on: July 11, 2010, 11:33:59 PM »
once again
http://www.mediafire.com/?ohyemy02or2
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #7 on: July 11, 2010, 11:57:35 PM »
Ohai :)

Beelzebub-looks good.. level on blacks too light IMO
Blazer Drive- The grays should be flatten more.
D.Grayman-looks good :)
DD-same as blazer drive
Fairy Tail-work on your denoise... grays should be flatten more.
Naruto-burn on the cracks, the grays should be lighter at the bottom, burn the guy on 5th panel(the  one with grays).burn :)
Reborn-level blacks, its too white. then burn the spikes, animals, yamamoto tux :)
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 12:56:49 AM »
what is a good way to flatten they gray?
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #9 on: July 12, 2010, 12:02:57 PM »
You can use neat image or topaz :>

I forgot what tutorial I used, there are a lot of tutorials over the net :>

« Last Edit: July 12, 2010, 12:34:07 PM by kitsune09 »
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #10 on: July 17, 2010, 10:06:30 PM »
i cant figure out how to flatten grays without making the rest of the pic look like crap  :dizzy :T.T :x_x
*shoots self in the head*
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #11 on: July 17, 2010, 10:18:25 PM »
i have a lot of time ...
and I'm 23 years old ....
that's I want to be a cleaner... :confident
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #12 on: July 23, 2010, 05:32:10 PM »
@kyushizuka, please do the cleaning test and make your own topic. ^^
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #13 on: August 03, 2010, 08:10:42 PM »
it's been a while...but here it is again
http://www.mediafire.com/?4lzct3gwgvffh90
with thanks to AvalonsAyame
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Re: Jdjtbgs Cleaner Application (repost)
« Reply #14 on: August 05, 2010, 08:55:22 PM »
Beelzebub: Great, nothing to say.

Blaze Drive: Be careful not to burn away the speedlines inside the sfx in the 3rd panel, also the greys can be a little flatter.

D.Gray Man: Good job for such a bad raw. It's a little bit blurry, sharpen it a bit. Greys are good too.

DD: In 1st panel left side, remove that dirt with the dodge tool.

FT: Good job, you don't have to remove text outsides bubbles ;)

Naruto: A little bit blurry, use sharpen to fix it.

Reborn: Good merge and greys are nice too. Make sure that all the white is white. (Bottom right corner)

Fix those and send a PM to Devilsadvocate101 to have him take a look at your application.
Good job =)
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