VK = i think over denoised, and you miss some detail in panel 1
Quote from: Abe-San on September 03, 2011, 03:44:45 PMVK = i think over denoised, and you miss some detail in panel 1Uh, I didn't do VK, did I? I didn't include it in the .rar because it was optional. And I'll start working on a redo soon. I just did my third redo for Red Hawk Scans today, I would like to take a break for a couple hours at least.EDIT: Also, I'm a cleaner, isn't it the typesetter's job to do the redrawning stuff?EDIT2: And on the +C clean, aren't I supposed to remove the Japanese text? Part of the cleaner's job is to remove the Japanese text, right?
+C: A bit blurry, didn't crop of enough at the top. (look at the top right corner)BB: Grays are bit noisy, but I can live with it for the test. Burn the blacks. Level the whites a bit. Crop off left side a bit.DMW: Redraw the white lines at the right side just above the black rectangle. Pretty good =)DD: This one needs some work. Grays aren't right yet. Don't worry about losing detail while denoising for this one. To get this one right you MUST redraw the black lines in the grays or it will look bad 100% =/FT: What did you do here? o.O These look like they were cleaned separately. You should merge them, clean and then redraw the middle part. Grays look weird here, merge is too visible and left side the part where the gray/black mixes look weird.KHR: Crop left side, too noisy and the page is also too light. Rainbow: Overleveled whites. Forgot to crop of the bottom.I'm sure you can pass if you try =) Looking forward to your redo.
just wait .all staff are busy atm ..^^