Soon to be followed by a cleaner app, since you're specifically looking for those, but since this is my expertise, I figured posting this first couldn't do much harm.
Name/Nickname: Devon/Murdering
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: United States / Mountain
Gender: Female
Age: 20
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mercurycure@hotmail.comWhat Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreader
Why You Want This Position: Because I enjoy proofreading things and contributing to my fandoms. Shh, I'm a little nerdy.
Your Time Available: Varies; Will stay on board for a while, but sorority/school commitments will take priority if it comes to a time crunch.
Experience: Been doing PR work for another scanlation group since last year, and have general expertise with the English language and its mechanics.
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(top right) Master, work is work! It's because you wouldn't stop rambling about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement 2 Apple Tree 4-(top left) Story Youn In-Wan
-Art Yang Kyung-Il-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-The release of the smash hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi; All 17 Volumes!!
Page 2-Hope will survive until the end! The next move is...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away...she said something about a florist.
-Where is it, Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me, I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist that's right next door... / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa / Haa
-Nice one Bichula!
-Master did a good job, too!
Page 3-Welcome! How fortunate to have you with us today <3
-And what are you hoping to find at Enzel Florists, Angel-sama~? <3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it, Bichula!
-But she called me an angel, even though I'm a devil!
-It pissed me off!
-Geeze… Stop causing me trouble. / We have no time, we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami is dropped into hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please, just react to anything involving Nami!
Page 4-(top right) The Story So Far: In order to return to the demon world, the banished devil Kucabara is acting as a lawyer for sinners. This time, the Unknown Soul Nami has been judged by Kucabara to have not committed suicide. She linked with him in contract!-You know, when dogs are kept by humans, / what do you think happens when it's feeding time?
-The strong dogs form a group, / and the weak dogs line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to do that to fill their bellies,
-Then how would it work for you humans...
-If you gathered the trash / that was turned away from seeking pleasure?
Page 5-Welcome to my place of torment
(TN- The words used were literally 'hell' but considering what comes next it doesn't work so well when translated as hell in English, so I went with this instead)-Eating Hell.
Page 6-I am a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my hell, pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten, the strong eat. / But no matter how many times a soul dies, it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably, be eaten cruelly… this is continually repeated!
-For the next four thousand years!
-Pl...please save me!! / I'm begging you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It's true…please, believe me!!
Page 7-Kyaaaa!!
-Why,
-Why is there no reaction?
Page 8-It's strange...if this is the place that Nami visited, then there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure it was this shop?
-Let's try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station, right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now, Nami is...
-You've been with me for so long, but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm a nasty dude who just gives up? / You still don't understand anything!
Page 9-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide, / You're showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station
-Was just your foot slipping?
Page 10-Like I said. / There aren't any traces left at the station.
-Dammit... / There must be something...
-Do you know that the special strength of a Shinigami.
-is an ability to manipulate reality...a little bit?
-That day, when you started to lose your footing near the tracks, / You weren't going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily going to come to hell.
Page 11-So with my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't do their job in the human world,
-they can't live, either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone who helped me died.
-Old man, could that be Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was called Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-She gave this coat to me. That young lady was just like an angel...
Page 13-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn, do you?
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snow storm that day...
Page 14-Everyone was just searching for romance in the snow...
-Nobody spared a glance for a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to be getting on a train soon. (Not sure who's saying this line? I'd need a raw to clarify the tense on this.)
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still filled with hope...
Page 15-She said something to me.
-"Keep on trying, mister".
-"Tomorrow, even if the world is destroyed, I'll plant"
-"An apple tree today," or something like that...
-Now I see, that's how it was.
Page 16-17Page 18-The convoluted puzzle has
-Been completely solved.
-I will now make the closing statement
-On Nami's behalf.
-Everything has been made clear with the coat in his hand. Next time, the conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25
