Good.. cus we're gonna whip you good

My body may be in pain but my soul's flame will always be burning brightly~
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Naruto, for a moment, I was like. Sexy. End of sentence.
Reborn, while I was doing it, the gray area on the right bottom corner bothered me, I was indecisive about erasing it or keeping it. Some parts made me second guess myself...
Beelz, I thought it was alright the sky kinda bothered me...
Blazer, I tried to get more whites~
Dgrayman... end of sentence.
DD, I feel like I kinda burn it a little bit too much, but then it also feels right...
FT, I'm sure I should have denoised more...

I need sleep~

Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~

Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~Sexy~

First off: I dunno what you did to DGM but sweet flying jesus the greys are sexy. though there are some bits i need to complain at. Blazer's awesome too.. also Naruto jesusgasm its hot

so i'd like you to talk to you through msn cus live is always more efficient
but i'm gonna smack you around a bit here too :D


Note: you forgot to resize but its ok i won't spank you for that


Beelz: Where did your burner go? You need to burn baby burn those blacks @.@ You have a choice with this page of either leveling the blacks more or burning alot. I would do a little bit of leveling a little bit of burning @.@ Other than that.. Nice, pleasant and sexy job indeed :D you're right about denoising just a bit more, but the greys are still good

Blazer:
Just keep that burner and invert out cus you need to burn off all the little non-black spots on the blacks @.@ like on the mouth thingies.. the SFX, the shadow thing over the shoulder of the grey guy, etc

DGM: Right, so like i said the greys are orgasm worthy, but what's more of a turn off is the way they fade into the whites. all the rest of the page, aside the quality of the greys is rough @.@ I dunno what you did, but it'd be amazingly good if you managed a way of keeping your greys nice and hot, while leaving the rest of the page smooth too xd

DD: I think the only icky here is the leveling of the blacks o.O Unless thats all burning, but i doubt it cus the greys are too dark XD. the whites are good though, and i dunno about the greys because the denoising looks a bit messed by the strong blacks, but if you had to level that much then you probably didn't denoise enough @.@

Fairytail: Denoising, and burning, both aren't enough @.@ I'll give you some tips and hints over msn :D

Naruto: yum

Reborn: The denoising is kinda weird. Do you level before denoising? because I'm thinking that might be the cause of the weird greys (overleveling before denoising) D: Also, Too dark, that's for sure. This page'S greys are usually much lighter. Also for your grey blob thing at the bottom, it always depends on how the outcome looks. If it looks better without, you take it off. But the ideal is to keep it and make it look good, looking at the raws, I think you can manage to make it look good @.@.


Soo that's it for now, I'll add you on msn: when you receive an invite from an anne, don't worry it's not an e-prostitute

I thought you wanted to apply as a translator? What happened?

It's best if you start again from the raws Nghiakins, instead of modifying the original pages (if that's not what you did then my apologies T_T)
but yeah the fifth isn't as good as the fourth D:

I can smell the frustration (maybe not) in you my child. This is my advice: go party, get drunk, have fun, come back and rape this test

Unless you wanna rape this test now, then get on msn as soon as you can and i'll point you in directions


though about the pages: although the geys are mostly weird, you did really good with burning, and the DGM page is overall great :D

also, when there's persistent dust, use the brush to get rid of it

2nd also: Fairytail.. Don't level the dust away @.@ just burn the parts that need it

ah knowing me i probably managed to mess up copying and pasting your email into the adding thingy

I'll try again XD

lol dude your doin some weird stuff you should just denoise level and then burn and remove dust and not do anything else till you get the hang of it. don't mess with greys when leveling cause they look so weird... becareful with the denoising don't over do it.






ps sorry if my comments are rude

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No problem, I accept any critique or advice.
FT, DD, and Beel look a bit weird to me. FT the sky part bothered me, DD, it just annoyed me, and Beel... I don't remember.

Now now these look great just some errors.
let's see... Reborn and Naruto, these are good to go i see nothing bad with them.
Fairy Tail hmmm i think you overleveled the whites a bit.
All the other ones it seems you denoised a tad bit more then necessary, looks like you also forgot to burn somethings. Yeah like the tree and Oga's shirt, or the hair in DD. Looks like you also messed up on the blazer drive one one the top panel. The SFX is meant to be stripped, you should be careful to not mess up the original picture too much, even though it looks better LOL.

and that's all i see, yeah, just fix those parts.