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Offline nghia2daizzo

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Nghia's Sexy Comeback Application or something along those lines.
« on: August 09, 2010, 03:05:36 AM »
Name/Nickname: Nghia, Sexy Beast, Sex Kitten Leader, Gundam Sexscythe~
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: -8:30, USA~
Gender: Male
Age: 16 I'm of legal age to drive!
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: nghia2daizzo_@hotmail.com, my aim is nghia2daizzo, I'm ALWAYS on aim.
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Cleaner, or the guy who is just there to be pretty.
Why You Want This Position: I noticed while reading manga that one chapter of something, in the credits there was only one listed cleaner, whether only one cleaner actually worked on it or not is not of my concern. I just figured staff is very lacking.
Your Time Available: If I'm not at dance practice, working out, practicing my script for drama, or doing homework, I'm probably going to be on the computer. If I'm not doing anything on a school day then my available times would be from 3 pm - 11 pm, pacific time. I'm an incoming junior in high school, so my schedule is most time consuming so my availability may change.
Experience: It's been 3-4 years since I begun using photoshop, however I believe whatever skills I had have deteriorated. I attempted to join IEM many months ago, but that was a bad time due to school. Although this year is gonna be worst... but that doesn't matter~ Let's see... what else...?

Momo, my sex kitten, you still here!?

Daniel, you still alive?

http://www.mediafire.com/?ssvklm3s0qnenq2
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Re: Nghia's Sexy Comeback Application or something along those lines.
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2010, 09:56:11 AM »
Wow, another application xD Here are my critics:

Reborn: Too much dust left, like the bottom right corner. You should also burn all the blacks. The mark of the split is still visible either.

Naruto: Burn the blacks here too, but you burned/leveled the cracks a little bit too much. You don't have to remove the ! or ? from the bubbles if that's the only thing in it. There is a fair amount of dust on this one too.

FT: This one is overleveled. Please check the blacks in the third and fourth panel. I don't really like the grays on this page, it's too light and so noisy.

DD: You forgot to burn some places and left some noise.

DGM: Same as DD. You removed the gutter shadow the wrong way, This site has a good tutorial on how to remove it.

BD: The grays could be a little flatter. You forgot some blacks again.

Beelzebub: You just need to burn this page a little more. Like the top of the tree and the letters of the vending machine.

Fix those and I'll look at it again. Good luck with your next try =)
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Re: Nghia's Sexy Comeback Application or something along those lines.
« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2010, 09:59:20 AM »
Aha welcome back, so first....who r u ?  :beaten

No seriously,

Beelz - So first, your cleans have to be in a resolution of 72. Your blacks are not burned (well they look like you did nothing on it.) So, this page's no good :)
BD - Same
D.GM - Same
KHR  Same and your mergin's good but you can do better.
Naruto - Same
FT - Same
DD - Same

Sorry, not have a lot of time but I will try to help you later during the day.
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Re: Nghia's Sexy Comeback Application or something along those lines.
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 12:28:52 AM »
Most of the older staff remember me or something, that's what Hikaru/Daniel/Danifer says~ I must be a celebrity of some sort! Yeah I just noticed that there were hella applications for cleaners, maybe I should just be a translator >.< But then my 10+ fails at being an IEM's cleaner will go to waste!~ That's right 10+, I might hold a record for the most failures at this, I hope not. I was nearly a member but after I awhile I was too lazy to message Devils everyday and just dropped it!

http://www.mediafire.com/?sc5bj71z0j5wk43

I'm not too about KHR or FT, but I think everything else should be semi passable xP
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Re: Nghia's Sexy Comeback Application or something along those lines.
« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2010, 11:09:28 AM »
Beelzebub: Overleveld, the page is too dark and the edges are crisp.

BD: Speedlines on the sfx are overburned. The grays too noisy and dark too.

DGM: Overleveled. Also, the grays are really weird.

DD: Overleveled, you can't see the difference between grays and blacks :O

FT:  A little overleveled. The grays are too noisy too.

Naruto: Gray panels are noisy and you overused the burn tool. (You can see the places around the blacks are darker) There are some dusts left. You didn't crop off the right side.

Reborn: Overleveled. A lot of dusts left and not all blacks are black.

Good luck on your next try.
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