I would also like to apply for proof reading i got here through a link so i dont know how to create my own topic so sorry if im doing this in the wrong place
Application:
Name/Nickname: Georgebasto
Country of Origin & time Zone: England UK (GMT 0)
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Enter MSN or Yahoo Messenger: dont currently have won
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreader
Why You Want This Position: I want to support the manga community by proofreading
Your Time Available: 4pm to 8pm on weekdays and alot of the weekend
Experience: I have a GCSE in English but that's about it
I would also like to apply for proof reading i got here through a link so i dont know how to create my own topic so sorry if im doing this in the wrong place
Application:
Name/Nickname: Georgebasto
Country of Origin & time Zone: England UK (GMT 0)
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Enter MSN or Yahoo Messenger: dont currently have won
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreader
Why You Want This Position: I want to support the manga community by proofreading
Your Time Available: 4pm to 8pm on weekdays and alot of the weekend
Experience: I have a GCSE in English but that's about it
p.118
Niko: There's no cage that exists in Polaris!
text: In fact, the story of Polaris is about how the prince and the princess of the Ursa Minor accepted the arranged marriage, and lived happily ever after. And that's all.
text: Yes. What intervened in this story was my imagination.
Fran: ...The conclusion ought to be the same.
Sfx: Rustling.
text: However, it's you too, that being deceptive. You're talking about your "imagination", since you too have your favourable story line "She chose on her own to stay by her love".
p.119
Niko: You’re a liar!!
text: Aah, why this child look straight at me, with those kind of eyes?
Niko: You deceived me!! / You're awful!
text: As if I'm wrong
Sfx: Breathe in
Fran: Yes
Fran: Maybe it's a lie // I thought it would be nice if it was like that
p.120
text: However, I didn't deceive you. That is to say, it’s stories that are told for the purpose of entertaining people...
text: The truth of fiction, is almost helpless before "imagination". As for this world, everything is about facts based on evidence
Fran: It doesn't matter whether it's true or false. Since it’s you who decide if my story was true / You should just accept that it was interesting
text: Well, without evidence, even history and fact could become fiction. / I'm only saying that it's more fun if there’s room for intervention.
p.121
Fran: That's why also listeners decide on what truth their own hearts want
text: "Cage of Polaris". / This cage is made up of thought called "me" This would also be the truth for people who are happy being locked in a cage.
Fran: You too.
p.122
Fran: Don't you think that freedom of speech, and pleasantness lie in there?
Niko: ...
Niko: I don't understand difficult stuff, although... / I understand one thing!
Fran: What is it?
Niko: That you're a pervert!!!!
Sfx: Smile.
Fran: Yes, that's correct. I'm glad that you found out.
p.123
Fran: --Aah, it's around time for me to go, otherwise it will be too dark
Niko: ...
