Name/Nickname:
FrankieCesca-Chan
Country Of Origin & Time Zone:
Uk ( GMT London Time)
Gender:
Female
Age:
16
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger:
franki1993@aol.com (msn)
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In:
Proof-reader
Why You Want This Position:
As to gain more practice in discovering incorrect grammar, punctuation and spelling's and correct them. Doing this will also aid me in my studies as I am taking steps to become an English teacher.
Your Time Available:
At least 4 hours every day
Experience:
16 years of speaking English, 12 years of English classes (in which we have to correct others work) and also being an A* English candidate for my exams. If by experience you mean by proofreading manga, then unfortunately, none.
Page 1
-(top right) Master. Work is work! It’s because you wouldn’t stop going on about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement 2 Apple Tree 4
-(top left) Story Youn In-Wan
-Art Yang Kyung-Il
-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-Release of the huge hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi All 17 Volumes!!
Page 2
-There is a hope that you don't give up until the end for! The next moves are...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away...she said something about a florist.
-Where is it Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me; I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist that's right next door, / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa / Haa
-Nice one Bicula!
-Master also did a good job too!
Page 3
-Welcome, how fortunate to have you with us today <3
-And what would you be searching for at Enzel Flower? Angel-sama<3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it Bichula!
-But she called me an angel even though I'm a devil!
-It pissed me off.
-Geez...stop causing me trouble. / We have no time; we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami is dropped into hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please, just react to anything involving Nami!
Page 4
-(top right) The Story So Far, in order to return to the demon world, the banished devil Kucabara is acting as a lawyer for sinner. This time, the Unknown Soul, Nami has been judged by Kucabara to not have committed suicide. She is linked with him in a contract!
-You know, when dogs are being kept by humans, / what do you think happens when feeding time comes around?
-The strong dogs form a group, / the weak dog’s line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to, they do that to fill their bellies,
-Then how would it work for you humans?
-If you gathered the trash / who were turned away from seeking pleasure?
Page 5
-Welcome to my place of torment (TN- The words used were literally 'hell' but considering what comes next it doesn't work so well when translated as hell in English, so I went with this instead)
-Eating Hell.
Page 6
-I’m a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my hell pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten, the strong eat. / But no matter how many times a soul dies it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably, be eaten cruelly...that is continually repeated!
-For the next four thousand years!
-Pl...Please save me!! / I'm beg’ in you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It is true...please believe me!!
Page 7
-Kyaaaa!!
-Why?
-Why is there no reaction?
Page 8
-Its strange...if this is the place that Nami visited then there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure it was this shop?
-Let’s try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now Nami is...
-You’ve been with me for a long time, but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm I nasty dude who just gives up! / You still don't understand anything!?
Page 9
-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide, / You’re showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station...
-Was just your foot slipping?
Page 10
-Like I said. / There aren't any traces left at the station.
-Dammit... / there must be some thing...
-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami.
-That is an ability to manipulate reality...a little bit.
-That day, when you started to lose your footing near the tracks, / You weren't going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily going to come to hell.
Page 11
-So by my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't work their business in the human world,
-Then they can’t live either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone who helps me dies.
-Old man, could that be Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was called Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-She gave this coat to me. That young lady was just like an angel...
Page 13
-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn do you!
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snow storm that day...
Page 14
-Everyone was just searching for romance on the snow...
-No body turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to be getting on a train soon.
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still filled with hope...
Page 15
-She said something to me.
-"Keep on trying, mister".
-"Tomorrow, even if the world is destroyed, I'll plant"
-"An apple tree today" or something like that...
-Now I see, that's how it was.
Page 16-17
Page 18
-The convoluted puzzle has
-Been completed solved.
-I will now make the closing state mint
-On Nami's behalf?
-Everything has been made clear with the coat in his hand. Next time, conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25
