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PROOF READER APPLICATION
« on: April 08, 2010, 05:32:17 AM »
Name/Nickname: Kajack10
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: SYDNEY GMT +10
Gender: male
Age:14
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: jeremycheuk09@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proof reader, if you got Chinese manhua i can translate them for you i can speak fluent Chinese and i know Chinese
Why You Want This Position: I have read alot of manga and i thought that it would be nice if it was me who helped in this manga
Your Time Available: right now im on easter holidays so from 1pm to 3am after holidays 5pm-12pm
Experience: haven't got any experience but, im pretty good at English never had a problem spelling any English word also can speak fluent English, got full marks in punctuation and spelling in English essays
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Re: PROOF READER APPLICATION
« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 11:37:42 AM »
o sorri man i forgot about the test thing man i coulden't see it at all here it is  ;^^

Page 1

-(top right) Master. Work is work! It’s because you wouldn’t stop going on about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement 2 Apple Tree 4
-(top left) Story Youn In-Wan
-Art Yang Kyung-Il
-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-Release of the huge hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi All 17 Volumes!!

Page 2

-There is a hope you shouldn’t give up until the end! The next move is...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away...she said something about a florist,
-Where is it Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me, I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist that's right next door... / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa / Haa
-Nice one Bichula!
-Master did a good job too!

Page 3

-Welcome, how fortunate to have you with us today <3
-And what would you be searching for, at Enzel Flower? Angel-sama~<3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it Bichula!
-But she called me an angel even though I'm a devil!
-It pisses me off.
-Geez...stop causing me trouble. / We have no time; we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami is dropped into hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please just react to anything involving Nami!

Page 4

-(top right) The Story So Far, In order to return to the demon world, the banished devil Kucabara is acting as a lawyer for sinners. This time, the Unknown Soul Nami has been judged by Kucabara to not have committed suicide. She was then linked with him in a contract!
-You know, when dogs are being kept by humans, / What do you think happens when feeding time comes around?
-The strong dogs form a group, / The weak dogs line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to fill their bellies like that,
-Than how would it work for you humans...
-If you gathered the trash / who were turned away from seeking pleasure?

Page 5

-Welcome to my place of torment (TN- The words used were literally 'hell' but considering what comes next it doesn't work so well when translated as hell in english, so I went with this instead)
-Eating Hell.

Page 6

-I am a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my hell, pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten by the strong/ But no matter how many times a soul dies it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably or be eaten cruelly...that is continually repeated!
-For the next four thousand years!
-Pl...please save me!! / I'm begging you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It’s true...please believe me!!

Page 7

-Kyaaaa!!
-Why,
-Why is there no reaction?

Page 8

-Its strange...if this is the place that Nami visited then there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure it was this shop?
-Let’s try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now Nami is...
-You’ve been with me for a long time but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm I nasty dude who just gives up! / You still don't understand anything!?
Page 9

-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide, / You’re showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station
-Was just your foot slipping?

Page 10

-Like I said. / There aren't any traces that are left at the station.
-Damm it... / There must be some thing...
-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami.
-That is an ability to manipulate reality...a little bit.
-The day when you started to lose your footing near the tracks, / You weren’t going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily going to come to hell.

Page 11

-So by my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't work their business in the human world,
-Then they can’t live either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone who helped me died.
-Old man, could that be Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was called Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-She gave this coat to me. That young lady was just like an angel...

Page 13

-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn do you!
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snow storm that day...

Page 14

-Everyone was just searching for romance on the snow...
-No body turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to be getting on a train soon.
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still filled with hope...

Page 15

-She said something to me.
-"Keep on trying, mister".
-"Tomorrow, even if the world is destroyed, I'll plant"
-"An apple tree today" or something like that...
-Now I see, that's how it was.

Page 16-17

Page 18

-The convoluted puzzle has
-Been completely solved.
-I will now make the closing statement
-On Nami's behalf.
-Everything has been made clear with the coat in his hand. Next time, conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25


« Last Edit: April 08, 2010, 11:39:21 AM by kajack10 »
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Offline kajack10

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Re: PROOF READER APPLICATION
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2010, 10:51:19 AM »
hey man ive been waiting for quite some time why is it taking so long any way man  ;^^
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Re: PROOF READER APPLICATION
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 05:57:10 PM »
Please be patient, our proofreaders are very busy! O:
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Re: PROOF READER APPLICATION
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 05:34:55 PM »
Here are some mistakes I found:

-Welcome, how fortunate we are to have you with us today <3
"We are" indicates who is fortunate.

-And what would you be searching for,
The comma there is unnseccessary

The Story So Far:
A colon is needed here instead of a comma.

-You think I'm I nasty dude who just gives up!
The "I" should be "a".

-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami?
This needs to be a question mark and not a period.

There are a few too many mistakes in here for me to accept you, sorry.  If you do re-apply in the future be sure to look more at the punctuation.
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Re: PROOF READER APPLICATION
« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 06:37:50 AM »
k man ill try harder next time
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