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azngirlchibi
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Proofreader Application
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Name/Nickname: azngirlchibi
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: Canada, GMT -5
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger:
blueowl829@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreader
Why You Want This Position:
I’ve been a fan of manga and anime ever since I was a little girl, since I grew up in a Chinese family and they didn’t want me to forget my Chinese (Doraemon was my Barney XD). I hate reading manga or anime subtitles that look like it has been thrown into an online translator and pasted onto the pages/screen, so I really would enjoy helping with the quality control (I get a little nervous tic when I see people misusing “its,” “it’s,” and “its’”). I don’t know how much I’ll be able to do, but I would like to help out as much as I can.
Your Time Available: 6:00 PM – 10:00 PM, except on Mondays and Saturdays, and I’m free from 2:00 PM – 10:00 PM on Sundays. I firmly believe in the power of sleeping for at least 9 hours, and unfortunately, I have school to attend to :(
Experience: I’ve spent most of my life translating things – both written and spoken – for my parents from Chinese to English, so I know how important it is to proofread things without losing its core meaning. I can’t read Chinese though (or I’d apply as a translator too >_<). I usually end up getting assignments and essays shoved at me for peer proofreading stuff in English, and I’m a beta reader on fanfiction.net, so I get people asking me for proofreading and opinions on their fanfics as well (and between you and me, some of the grammar is horrific).
First Test:
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Page 1
-(top right) Master, work is work! It’s because you wouldn’t stop going on about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement: 2, Apple Tree: 4
-(top left) Story: Youn In-Wan
-Art: Yang Kyung-Il
-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-Release of the huge hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi, All 17 Volumes!!
Page 2
-There is hope if you don't give up until the end! The next move is...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away, she said something about a florist…
-Where is it, Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me; I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist that's right next / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa… / Haa…
-Nice one Bichula!
-Master did a good job too!
Page 3
-Welcome! How fortunate we are to have you with us today <3
-And what would you be searching for at Enzel Flower, Angel-sama~?<3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it, Bichula!
-But she called me an angel even though I'm a devil!
-It pissed me off.
-Geez...stop causing me trouble. / We have no time; we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami is dropped into Hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please, just react to anything involving Nami!
Page 4
-(top right) The Story So Far: In order to return to the Demon World, the banished devil Kucabara is acting as a lawyer for sinners. This time, the Unknown Soul, Nami, has been judged by Kucabara as to not have committed suicide. She linked with him in a contract!
-You know, dogs kept by humans… / What do you think happens when feeding time comes around?
-The strong dogs form a group. / The weak dogs line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to do that to fill their bellies,
-then how would it work for you humans
-if you gathered the trash / who were turned away from seeking pleasure?
Page 5
-Welcome to my place of torment: (TN- The words used were literally 'Hell,' but it doesn’t work so well considering what comes next when translated as ‘Hell’ in English, so I went with this instead.)
-“Eating Hell.”
Page 6
-I am a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my Hell, pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten, the strong eat, / but no matter how many times a soul dies, it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably, be eaten cruelly...that is continually repeated…
-…for the next four thousand years!
-Pl...Please save me!! / I'm begging you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It's true...please believe me!!
Page 7
-Kyaaaa!!
-Why…
-Why is there no reaction?
Page 8
-It’s strange...if this is the place where Nami visited, there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure it was this shop?
-Let’s try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now Nami is...
-You’ve been with me for so long, but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm a nasty dude who just gives up! / You still don't understand anything!
Page 9
-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide. / You’re showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that, / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station
-was just your foot slipping?
Page 10
-Like I said, / there aren't any traces left at the station.
-Damn it... / there must be something...
-Did you know that the special ability of a Shinigami
-is the power to manipulate reality... just a little bit?
-That day when you started to lose your footing near the tracks… / You weren't going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily going to come to Hell.
Page 11
-So by my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't work their business in the human world,
-they can’t live either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone who helped me died.
-Old man, could it be that Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was named Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-she gave this coat to me. That young lady was just like an angel...
Page 13
-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn, do you?
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snowstorm that day...
Page 14
-Everyone was just searching for romance in the snow...
-Nobody turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to be getting on a train soon.
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still full of hope...
Page 15
-She said something to me:
-"Keep on trying, mister.”
-"Tomorrow, even if the world is destroyed, I'll plant
-an apple tree today," or something like that...
-Now I see. That's how it was.
Page 16-17
Page 18
-The convoluted puzzle has
-been completely solved.
-I will now make the closing statement
-on Nami's behalf!
-Everything has been made clear because of the coat in his hand. Next time: the Conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25.
*Actually, I wanted to ask about the part about the snowstorm. Are you sure it was a snowstorm? I find it a little hard to believe that people were just walking around in a snowstorm “looking for romance.” I was wondering if it would just mean “snowing” in this scenario, but if translated directly, meant “snowstorm.”
*Also, would we have a copy of a scan or something to look at while proofreading this? I find it a bit easier to proofread if I knew what the context of the sentences was.
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Re: Proofreader Application
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January 12, 2010, 04:10:00 AM »
Please don't think I abandoned you... I have exams starting this week and going through next, so I won't be able to score your script until this weekend at least.
Until then keep up the good work, and you can always use scripts on Mangahelpers.com as more practice!
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Re: Proofreader Application
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February 10, 2010, 10:41:43 PM »
sorry about the delay but we will get to your application soon XD
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thanks twobit!! i'm legal!! XD
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Re: Proofreader Application
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March 01, 2010, 04:43:05 PM »
Hello and sorry for the very long wait. The main errors I see in here are punctuation related. Mostly unnecessary commas. Just remember that commas aren't needed all the time. Sometimes it may seem as though a pause is needed but it really isn't. Try reading the sentence through a few times, once with the pauses and once without the pauses. I still believe that you have what it takes and hopefully that tip helps a little. I would like you to try this script that was recently posted by Devil:
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p.1 (blank)
p.2
Left text: The shocking word that came out from Mystogan... "FT will disappear?"
Charle: Wendy!!
Wendy: I got to tell everybody about this!!
Mystogan: You shouldn't go!! // You alone must get out of the town!!
Wendy: There's no way that I alone would run away.
Wendy: I'm already // a member of Fairy Tail!!
p.3
top: Thanks for your support!
Right below: 2 chapters at one go & both chapters in color. Special 47 pages!!
note: The shape of the dream can be changed into anything! Possibilities are infinite!
p.4
top: Fairy Tail.
small note: Chpater 168 Earthland.
note: Imagine to grab it!!
p.5
left outside the frame: Such an ordinary day... without knowing the threaten "despair"!?
Cana: It's good to go for a date with my boyfriend on a rainy day.
Mira: Cana... Leave some of your boyfriend for customers too.
Cana: Huh? Mira, are you going somewhere on a day like this?
Mira: Yeah, just to the church.
Man: If you're a man, you must get more stronger!! Being weaklings like that you can't protect Levi!!
They: O-... oh. // I know.
Mira: Elfman, let's go.
p.6
Elfman: Sis, please tell them too. They committed a blunder the other day.
Elfman: At the end, they lost their consciousness and Levi finished off the job by herself.
They: Arg... Don't say it again. // I feel woeful...
Mira: I think Jet and Droy are doing their best.
They: Mira-cha~n <3
Mira: In their own way.
They: You're so cruel!!
Lucy: Why they have to go to the church on the day like this?
Levi: Ah! I got it.
Cana: The anniversary of Lisanna's death is coming soon.
p.7
Lucy: Lisanna?
Levi: It's Mira and Elfman's younger sister.
Levi: It happened during a mission 2 years ago.
Levi: When the death anniversary gets closer they start to go to the church often.
Cana: Speaking of which, you... look like Lisanna a little.
Lucy: Do I?
Levi: Yeah you're a good friend of Natsu too.
Lucy: Uhuuh, Natsu had a close girl friend.
p.8
Wendy: Pant,/ pant.// Pant, / pant.
Gray: You are, // too sticky.
p.9
Gray: Can't you eat more cleanly?
Juvia: Juvia... eats this for the first time so...
Thought: They're acting all lovey-dovey.
Gray: You must eat like this if it's a Caramade Frank. / Like this! // Open your mouth wide like this.
Sfx bubble: Munch.
Juvia: Like this?
Sfx bubble: Munch.
Gray: It's not something that you eat elegantly anyway.
Juvia: But I think you better keep your clothes on.
Thought: How can I be active like her...
Thought: I want to... one day with Visca...
Visca: It doesn't stop rainning.
Man: Y-... yeah that's right.
p.10
Erza: You guys are really good friends.
Man: Ah... that's not...
Visca: Erza-san.
Erza: You must treasure "now". // Lest you should regret later.
Master: Hey, Erza, come here for a sec.
Erza: Yes master.
Master: It's about the 100 years quest.
When you finish, you can re-post the completed proofreading here in this topic.
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