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Proofreader application
« on: August 19, 2010, 10:14:11 AM »
Name/Nickname: AKZ
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: N/A
Gender: N/A
Age: I wonder~
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: .___.
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreading
Why You Want This Position: well i want it because i want to help with the manga in anyway since i can't read jap so i figured i could at least do this to help the other people on the team to make the manga get released faster and to give something back to the people who have dedicated their time to help
Your Time Available: anytime though it would be better on the weekends
Experience: i've proofread for some other scanlation company before

so here's my test answers:
(click to show/hide)
Page 1

-(top right) Master. Work is work! It’s because you wouldn’t stop going on about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement 2 Apple Tree 4
-(top left) Story Youn In-Wan
-Art Yang Kyung-Il
-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-Release of the huge hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi All 17 Volumes!!

Page 2

-There is a hope you don't give up until the end for! The next move is...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away...she said something about a florist,
-Where is it Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me, I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist that's right next door... / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa / Haa
-Nice one Bichula!
-Master did a good job too!

Page 3

-Welcome, how fortunate to have you with us today <3
-And what would you be searching for at Enzel Flower? Angel-sama~<3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it Bichula!
-But she called me an angel even though I'm a devil!
-It pissed me off.
-Geez...stop causing me trouble. / We have no time, we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami has dropped into hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please just react to anything involving Nami!

Page 4

-(top right) The Story So Far, In order to return to the demon world, the banished devil Kucabara is acting as lawyer for sinner. This time, the Unknown Soul Nami has been judged by Kucabara to not have committed suicide. She is linked with him in contract!
-You know, when dogs are being kept by humans, / What do you think happens when feeding time comes around?
-The strong dogs form a group, / The weak dogs line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to do that to fill their bellies,
-Than how would it work for you humans...
-If you gathered the trash / who were turned away from seeking pleasure?

Page 5

-Welcome to my place of torment (TN- The words used were literally 'hell' but considering what comes next it doesn't work so well when translated as hell in english, so I went with this instead)
-Eating Hell.

Page 6

-I am a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my hell pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten, the strong eat. / But no matter how many times a soul dies it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably, be eaten cruelly...that is continually repeated!
-For the next four thousand years!
-Pl...please save me!! / I'm begging you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It's true...please believe me!!

Page 7

-Kyaaaa!!
-why?
-Why is there no reaction?

Page 8

-Its strange...if this is the place that Nami visited then there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure it was this shop?
-Let’s try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now Nami is...
-You’ve been with me for long but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm a nasty dude who just gives up? / You still don't understand anything!

Page 9

-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide, / you’re showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station
-Was just your foot slipping?

Page 10

-Like I said. / There aren't any traces left at the station.
-Dammit... / There must be some thing...
-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami.
-That is an ability to manipulate reality...a little bit.
-That day when you started to lose your footing near the tracks, / You weren’t going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily going to come to hell.

Page 11

-So by my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't work their business in the human world,
-Then they can’t live either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone who helps me dies.
-Old man, could that be Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was called Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-She gave this coat to me. That young lady was just like an angel...

Page 13

-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn do you!
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snow storm that day...

Page 14

-Everyone was just searching for romance on the snow...
-No body turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to be getting on a train soon.
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still filled with hope...

Page 15

-She said something to me.
-"Keep on trying, mister".
-"Tomorrow, even if the world is destroyed, I'll plant"
-"An apple tree today" or something like that...
-Now I see, that's how it was.

Page 16-17

Page 18

-The convoluted puzzle has
-Been completed and solved.
-I will now make the closing statement
-On Nami's behalf?
-Everything has been made clear with the coat in his hand. Next time, conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25
« Last Edit: May 24, 2011, 03:17:41 AM by AKZ »
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Re: Proofreader application
« Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 08:35:07 PM »
Sorry for taking so long. 

Some mistakes I found:

-(title) Judgment 2: Apple Tree 4
-(top left) Story: Youn In-Wan
-Art: Yang Kyung-Il
Nothing major here, just colons needed.

-There is a hope you don't give up until the end for! The next move is...!?
-There is hope that you don't give up until the end!  (For)The next move is...!?
That is one way that line could read.  I put the "For" in there because it can work out either way.

-Welcome, how fortunate to have you with us today .<3
-Welcome, how fortunate "we are" to have you with us today .<3
We are needs to be there to show who is fortunate.

-(top right) The Story So Far:
Nothing major.  A colon is what is needed in this situation.

the banished devil Kucabara is acting as lawyer for sinner"s".
An "s" should be added to the end of sinner.

-Dammit... / There must be something...
Again nothing major.  "Something" should be one word.

-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami?
A question mark needs to be placed at the end here.

-That's the place where someone who helps me dies.
-That's the place where someone who helped me died.
This sentence should be in past tense.

-You never learn do you!?
A question mark needs to be used here since it is a question.

-No body turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
"Nobody" should be one word.

-On Nami's behalf?
No question mark should be here.

I will have to deny your application at this time.  There are a few mistakes too many here. 
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Re: Proofreader application
« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2010, 09:07:10 AM »
doesn't matter. i think i was half asleep while doing it anyways and i tend to skim read a lot so i may have missed a few things here or there
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