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Offline xenarie

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Proofreading Application
« on: January 26, 2010, 06:50:06 PM »
Name/Nickname: Rachel
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: Singapore UTC +8
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: schizo07@hotmail.com (MSN)
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In: Proofreading
Why You Want This Position: I'd love to help out and I find that this position suits me best.
Your Time Available: 5pm till midnight.
Experience: New :)

Page 1

-(top right) Master, work is work! It's because you wouldn't stop going on about information on humans!
-(title) Judgement 2: Apple Tree 4
-(top left) Story: Youn In-Wan
-Art Yang Kyung-Il
-The first chapter can be read for free on Club Sunday [clubsunday.jp]!
-Release of the huge hit!! Shin Angyo Onshi All 17 Volumes!!

Page 2

-There is still hope, don't give up until the end! Their next move is...!?
-Master! When Nami was being taken away, she said 'something about a florist'!
-Where is it, Bichula?
-She couldn't tell me!
-Excuse me, I'm in a hurry...
-There's a florist right next door... / to the station where Nami died!
-Haa / Haa
-Nice one Bicula!
-Master did a good job too!

Page 3

-Welcome, how fortunate are we to have you with us today <3
-And what would you be searching for at Enzel Flower? Angel-sama~<3
-Shut your face!
-I'm a devil!
-Stop it, Bichula!
-But she called me an angel even though I'm a devil!
-It pissed me off.
-Geez...stop causing trouble. / We have no time, we need to find the Innocence Item before Nami is dropped into hell!
-Devil Search Spray!!
-Anything's fine! Please just react to anything involving Nami!

Page 4

-(top right) The Story So Far: In order to return to the demon world, the banished devil, Kucabara, is acting as a lawyer for sinners. This time, the Unknown Soul, Nami, has been judged by Kucabara to not have committed suicide. She linked with him in contract!
-You know, when dogs are being kept by humans, / What do you think happens when feeding time comes around?
-The strong dogs form a group, / The weak dogs line up behind them to eat.
-If dogs are forced to do that to fill their bellies,
-Then how would it work for you humans...
-If you gathered the trash / who were turned away from seeking pleasure?

Page 5

-Welcome to my place of torment (TN- The words used were literally 'hell' but considering what comes next it doesn't work so well when translated as hell in English, so I went with this instead)
-Eating Hell.

Page 6

-I am a gentleman. I don't personally inflict pain upon sinners. / In my hell, pain is not given, because it is produced...
-The horrific death caused by...
-Hunger!
-The weak are eaten, the strong eat. / But no matter how many times a soul dies, it will soon be revived.
-Struggle miserably, be eaten cruelly...it is continually repeated!
-For the next four thousand years!
-Pl...please save me!! / I'm begging you, please save me!!
-I...I didn't commit suicide.
-It's true...please believe me!!

Page 7

-Kyaaaa!!
-Why?
-Why is there no reaction?

Page 8

-It's strange...if this is the place Nami visited, there should be some sort of reaction. / Bichula, are you sure this was the shop?
-Let's try searching a bit more.
-We couldn't find anything at the station right? Nor here...
-Master, it's already time.
-Right now Nami is...
-You've been with me for a long time but you still don't understand me.
-You think I'm a nasty dude who just gives up! / You still don't understand anything!

Page 9

-Uuh...
-Uuuh...
-Kuhihi...
-Dyuhihi!
-Not at all like someone who committed suicide. / You're showing such a passion to live.
-Well, as a reward for that / I'll tell you something interesting.
-Did you think that what happened at the station
-Was just your foot slipping?

Page 10

-Like I said. / There aren't any traces left at the station.
-Dammit... / There must be something...
-Do you know the special strength of a Shinigami?
-That is an ability to manipulate reality... just a little bit.
-That day when you started to lose your footing near the tracks, / You were't going to lose your footing and fall.
-Do you still not understand? / I'm saying that you were not necessarily coming to hell.

Page 11

-So by my deception...
-I caused a huge accident.
-If a Shinigami doesn't handle their business in the human world,
-Then they can't live either.
-Could you move a bit?
-That's the place where someone helped me die.
-Old man, could that be Nami...
-So the young lady who died here was called Nami?
-When I was on the verge of freezing to death,
-She gave me this coat. That young lady was like an angel...

Page 13

-Noo!! Kyaaa!!
-Guhihi!
-Hurry down here!!
-You never learn, do you!?
-Looks like you need a little extra nudging!
-There was a snow storm that day...

Page 14

-Everyone was just searching for romance in the snow...
-Nobody turned an eye towards a homeless guy like me.
-I'm going to board a train soon.
-I felt that she looked sad but,
-Her face was still filled with hope...

Page 15

-She said something to me.
-"Keep on trying, mister".
-"I'll still plant even if the world is destroyed tomorrow."
-"An apple tree today" or something like that...
-Now I see, that's how it was.

Page 16-17

Page 18

-The convoluted puzzle has
-Been completely solved.
-I will now make the closing statement
-On Nami's behalf.
-Everything has been made clear with the coat in his hand. Next time, conclusion!
-Continued in issue 25
« Last Edit: January 26, 2010, 06:58:59 PM by xenarie »
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Re: Proofreading Application
« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2010, 10:47:09 PM »
hi! sorry you haven't heard from us yet but we'll try to get your application done soon! :D
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thanks twobit!! i'm legal!! XD

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Re: Proofreading Application
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2010, 04:53:02 PM »
Hello and sorry for the long hold on your application.  I just finished going through your proofreading and would like to congratulate you on a job well done.  I only found one slight error which you can see here:

-Nice one Bicula!
-Nice one Bichula!

Bichula was spelled wrong.  Proofreaders also have to look out for mistakes such as these, making sure there is consistency in the script.  I am sure now you will watch out for small errors like that so your upcoming proof readings will be prefect.  I hereby accept you onto the team.
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Re: Proofreading Application
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2010, 05:57:22 PM »
Thanks so much! :D
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Re: Proofreading Application
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2010, 04:40:44 PM »
Quote from: xenarie on March 07, 2010, 05:57:22 PM
Thanks so much! :D

I'll talk to devil's as soon as he get's on about adding you to the team.  Also, I would like to try and talk to you on MSN later today. 
« Last Edit: March 08, 2010, 04:45:35 PM by lLuffyl »
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