*sighs*
Dear Avs, deary deary Avs XDDD
Sure, sure I'll handle this XD but, if avs wanted to crit after this, you can ignore my comments ^^
(Since I'm tired I won't be doing your pages in the usual order, just whatever popped out T_T)
Okay~ School 1: Fonts and Colors, start~!
Baku 14
Hmmm aside from some texts like "Plus, he didn't call..." one and "We're even having the meeting..." were too close to edges, wording in this page is okay. You should have used the "Midnight Kernboy BB" Instead of Wildwords for the cellphone message.
If you change the font your next redo, this page will pass my criteria of Level 1 ^^
Baku 2
Ummm okay. If I'm critiquing this in normal way, it would have been long. But, for Level 1 qualification, you only lacked the all caps CCZoinks. If you fix that in the next redo, this page is a pass as well.
Baku 9
This page passes the level 1 crit! Congrats! I'll crit this after you post the Level 1 redo :p
DD 1
Pass for level 1!
DD 4
Pass for level 1!
FT 6
This one's a pass too!
Rainbow 16:
Pass for level 1!
Reborn 13:
Pass for level 1!
Reborn 15:
Pass~
+C:
Pass! EDIT: A little mistake, shouldn't be too hard to fix. Even though the texts are in boxes, please note that this is a speech bubble, not an explanation or anything. So, WildWords would be the correct choice XD
Okay... ummm let's see what to say. It's a good app! You got 8/10 which is awesome! My policy is to crit for the next level, that is Centering and Redrawing, after you passed this one. So, after you posted your Level 1 completion redo, I will begin reviewing for level 2~
Good luck!
Starting with this app, I, Chiriko, will use a new critiquing method called "School". This has been voiced many times in our team chat but nobody is using it effectively. So, I'll do it to increase efficiency. In case you're confused. "School" Method consisted of three stages:
Level 1: Fonts and Colors
It's easy. Just use the right font and the right color and you can pass this level with a breeze. Like Black WildWords for normal bubble and Midnight Kernboy BB for technologic sound. Use WildWords italic #545454 for thoughts. Stuffs like that.
Level 2: Centering and redrawing
Ummm I'm not an expert with this one. But, for centering, I'll do my very best or I can ask someone else to take care of it for you dear applicants XD. As for redrawing, I will still use the the Letter-Grading system. B+ is what you required to pass from me :p
Level 3: All in a go
When you've done Level 1 and Level 2 super properly, your page will be seen in a detail way. Occasional nudging texts will be needed and so on. But, you're pretty much in to my list if you're only missing itsy beetsy part XD
Additional: I won't pass any Level 1 that didn't meet my criteria. That should be clear enough XD
okay then, best of luck!
