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Typesettig test - DERO
« on: June 15, 2010, 11:16:12 PM »
Nickname: Dero
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: Portugal.. gmt?
Gender:male
Age:16
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger:ha.dero@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In:typesetter , that would be nice
Why You Want This Position: i've been trying it (manga made by friends and me), and always wanted to try and do it in a more... "professional" way
Your Time Available:At least from 8 pm to 2 am every day, during summer.
Experience: None  :D xD, well apart from that project I mentioned above.

here it goes...
http://www.mediafire.com/?nmn21yd1jjn
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2010, 12:51:28 AM »
T.T waiting makes me nervous. My head hurts. Y.Y
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2010, 06:16:58 AM »
sorry for the wait. >.<
here's my feedback.

overall, they're looking really good for the first time! just few things you need to fix.

BB: need to add punctuation. ex, "oioi,", "look away.", "geeze." and such.
BB72: "let's explain." use wildword. sfx use felt.
DD12: "master, work is work" line, make it smaller. "release of the" line, no vertical please.
DD32: those heart shape, place them a little closer to the text.
FT32: "aaahh" make it much bigger.
FT52: 1st bubble on 3rd panel, "aaahhh" make it bigger. and if there is room for "!" then put "!" right next to the last "h". for example, the 1st panel, "charle" and "wendy" there's no room for "!!!" to be on the same line. so it's correct that you placed "!!!" on the next line. 4th and 5th panel, "wendy" and "Happy" make it bigger. and place them in the center. and no space between ~ and !!! please. (not happy~ !!! but happy~!!!)
FT92: 1st panel, both bubble, place text in the center. again no space between "gone" and "!!!" or "away" and "!!!". 4th panel, no space between "Jura-san" and "I'm glad". 5th panel, "no" and "it was" too big. make it smaller.
HB: 2nd panel, "uwaaa---" place it diagonally (like you did on "Of course" line). when you use augie, place them a little diagonally so that it looks more natural.
Reborn: need more work on cloning. when you clone do it more carefully. and place English text on where you couldnt clone well. by the way, you left one Japanese letter on kangaroo's tail.

looking forward to your redo. ^^
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2010, 11:41:03 PM »
Thank you :D ( i was getting nervous >.<)

http://www.mediafire.com/?o4lmkjzjdmj
here it goes. Hope I didn't mix anything
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2010, 03:14:28 PM »
Remember to save all pages according to this format (and don't rename pages either):

Quote from: devilsadvocate101 on May 20, 2009, 04:02:59 AM
Typeset all the pages with the given translations, do not change any wording. When saving the pages, do a Save to the web as a PNG-8 Perceptual w/diffusion, 64 colors and 100% dither - Depending on the manga you may be able to go as low as 14 or as high as 25. Just make sure it is clean without looking too pixelated. Keep the setting the same throughout the entire chapter.


Feedback go~

BB7
- 1 / keep the font size in the shouting bubbles consistent
- 3 / let's put the text back in the box?
- 5 / keep the font size in the talk bubbles consistent

BB11
- 6 / centre the second bubble

DD1
- good

DD3
- good

FT 3
- 4 / centre this bubble

FT 5
- 4 / centre this bubble
- 6 / centre the second bubble

FT 9
- 1 / makes sure Line Height is set to auto.. those are some big spaces between the lines.
- good otherwise!

HB
- 4 / put the 's' back with consultation..

Reborn
- Tsuna's shirt needs to be cloned so it's not just white behind the text

Look forward to your redo (:
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #5 on: June 20, 2010, 12:25:37 AM »
http://www.mediafire.com/?3ojfdne20ii

here =)
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 01:07:09 PM »
please aswer me i.i
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 04:29:36 PM »
here's feedback.

BB72: need punctuation for most line. "weak", all the lines on 4th panel and "it's ok..."
DD12: "master work is work" still way too big. make it smaller like the original Japanese text but no vertical just the size.
DD32: perfect.
FT32: 6th panel, make the text smaller by 1-2pt. everything else is perfect.
FT5: excellent.
FT92: 1st panel. both bubbles... hmm... somethings wrong. are they Left aligned? if so, center them. "it was a close thing" make it smaller.
HB: good.
Reborn: much better than before. but why dont you move the middle line and hide Tsuna's shoulder? like i said before, use english text to cover the hardest part to clone. 

it seems like you did set all caps for some pages so "I" do look "I" and that is right. but some other pages you didnt set all caps so "I" look "l" and that is not right. so fix them as well.

by the way, i just want to know, but why you renamed the pics? i dont see the point of doing it also, this is one of MUST things for typesetters to keep the page numbers right. it'll be a disaster, if a typesetter messed the page numbers. im just curious.
anyway, you're getting there!! 8D
looking forward to your redo. ^^

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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 08:57:12 PM »
Quote from: maguregumo on June 22, 2010, 04:29:36 PM

by the way, i just want to know, but why you renamed the pics? i dont see the point of doing it also, this is one of MUST things for typesetters to keep the page numbers right. it'll be a disaster, if a typesetter messed the page numbers. im just curious.



 That's because--- i'm lazy 8D most of the times xD and as I have all the older versions in one folder i just put numbers in the set an order. Aaaand .. ahm. They end up with that nae in the .zip. >.< sorry
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Re: Typesettig test - DERO
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 07:09:50 PM »
no no, dont be sorry. i was just curious coz i thought that there must be some reason. :)
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