good that you used the right fonts.
ok so here's overall feedback.
- plz no vertical.
- cap the cczoink as well.
- change your setting to "smooth".
- for those texts in thought bubbles, we use wildword, italic, #545454. and stroke the texts on background that's not white. ex: BL page7 the last panel, DD page1 and so on.
- make sure you always set "centered" ex: DD page3 on forth panel the second half of bubble and most text on FT page3 is set to left align.
- never let texts touch the bubble. make the font smaller if the texts get too close to the edge of the bubble.

also, you dont have to put psd files in your folder (it'll make it easier for us to dl your file ^^)
when you fix those, we'll give you more detailed critic so good luck. ^^

Erm... I edited the pages again and didn't know where to send them so i created another application post...

I took around 8 - 12 minutes per page, except for demon defense first page cos i got stuck a little bit. that one took me about 17 minutes

Name/Nickname: timlong
Country Of Origin & Time Zone: Singapore, GMT+8
Gender: Male
Age:15
Enter Msn or Yahoo messenger: walking_is_a_crime@hotmail.com
What Field You Would Like To Be Positioned In:typesetter
Why You Want This Position: I'm addicted to manga and really want to be part of the community that provides scanlations for everyone
Your Time Available:weekdays from 2 pm onwards, saturday whole day, sunday after 6
Experience: This is my first time actually, but i did character and logo design and digital art on photoshop for the past two years


These are the edited pages
http://www.4shared.com/file/164551107/4e891ff5/typesetting_app_2.html

Good job... just a few adjustments.

Beelzebub 7 - Make sure everything is centered. "Weak", "Let's Explain" is a little high up. Next, make sure that if you have text covering a background, put a white border around it, "If baby Be'el isn't touching...". All text boxes need to end with punctuation, so "Don't cry..." and "it's ok, it's ok..." should have periods. And "He doesn't seem..." can just be white over the black background. You can use a light grey there or white since it is over a black background.

Beelzebub 11 - Make sure everything is centered. "oi oi" and "a punk from town..." are all left justified. And "Geeze" is too high up in the word bubble. "Trash" is too high up (but doesn't need punctuation since it is a single word statement), and "I'll start" needs punctuation.

Defense Devil 1 - Watch your fonts. "Master, work is work..." should be cc Zoinks and much larger. Same for "Judgement 2: Apple Tree 4".


For the rest, it's all the same. Punctuation, centering text in word bubbles, making sure the text is not too big in word bubbles.

Here is an example of cover text: http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/162/01/